Ooh, yeah. :/ That's a challenging POV to write from. I don't know if I have any advice? Other than just kinda being like... well, there's always editing? After you get the bones of the story down? And, like, is it so much that he's oblivious, or just that he can't accept that this is true? 'cause self-defeating stubbornness sticking to an old truth is different from genuinely not noticing that his life has become this, y'know?
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Date: 5/4/19 21:45 (UTC)Ooh, yeah. :/ That's a challenging POV to write from. I don't know if I have any advice? Other than just kinda being like... well, there's always editing? After you get the bones of the story down? And, like, is it so much that he's oblivious, or just that he can't accept that this is true? 'cause self-defeating stubbornness sticking to an old truth is different from genuinely not noticing that his life has become this, y'know?