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Van Irie ([personal profile] yvannairie) wrote2019-04-05 10:15 pm
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I need someone new to yell about robot things with.

Who wants to hear about some dumb gay robots doing dumb gay robot stuff?
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[personal profile] shadaras 2019-04-05 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
If it helps, that premise sounds adorable, and like a story that's going to be a lot of fun -- once you wrangle it into happening.
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[personal profile] shadaras 2019-04-05 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, that's great!

Ooh, yeah. :/ That's a challenging POV to write from. I don't know if I have any advice? Other than just kinda being like... well, there's always editing? After you get the bones of the story down? And, like, is it so much that he's oblivious, or just that he can't accept that this is true? 'cause self-defeating stubbornness sticking to an old truth is different from genuinely not noticing that his life has become this, y'know?
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[personal profile] shadaras 2019-04-06 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, it sounds like you have a fairly good concept of what's going on, and then it just turns into needing to make words happen, which is... harder...
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[personal profile] shadaras 2019-04-06 02:06 pm (UTC)(link)
You'd said you had some ideas for little vignettes from the past -- maybe write one of those in full or something?
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[personal profile] shadaras 2019-04-06 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
do ittttt :D

self-indulgence is fun to write! especially if you aren't solid on any other ideas right now.